——2009福建省高考英语书面表达高二英语备课组最开放的命题最有话可说最深刻的寓意最完美的结合（内容与形式）试题分析内容要点以及语言结构数据分析：08、09年高考书面表达得分情况三、存在问题分析错误类型错误类型错误类型亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）3)概括式Asweknow,smilingisgoodforourhealth.It’suniversallyacknowledgedthatsmilingisofgreatbenefittoourdailylife.4）例举式Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Forinstance,smilingcanhelpmetohaveahappyfeeling...Itisgoodforustosmile.Forexample,smilingcanreleasethepressurefromstudyandlife,whichhelpsus.亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）3）排比式Inaword,asmilecanbringhappinesstome；asmilecanmakemegrowhealthier.SoIwanttosmile.4）建议式Inaword,Iwanttosmile.Myfellowstudents,takeactionplease.Sowhynotsmileateveryonearound?Whynotsmiletoday?Remembertosmilenomatterwhathappens.Ifeveryonesmilesatothers,ourworldwillbeamuchbetterone.书面表达高分秘诀：4．行文流畅，可读性强。有的学生能正确处理好句子与句子之间，词汇与词汇之间的联系，整篇文章衔接自然，脉络清楚，可读性强。Inaword,themoreoftenIsmile,themorelikelyIamtosucceed.5．首尾呼应，强化主题。有的文章结尾有力，起到强化主题，画龙点睛的作用。加深读者的印象。6．书写规范，赏心悦目。很多考生的书面表达字迹清楚、字体端正，大小写、标点正确无误，给人以美的享受，令改卷老师心旷神怡。佳作欣赏（1）Inaddition,myfriendsdeservemysmilebecausetheyaretheoneswhobelieveinmeandhelpmeoutofmanyproblems.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillsmileatmyteacherfortheirconstantencouragementandgreatdevotiontomyprogress.AndIwillalsosmileatmyselfforitcertainlywillbenefitmequitealot.Givenabigsmile,I’llbemuchmoreenergetictofinishmywork.Inaword,Iwanttosmileateveryonearoundmetobringeveryoneasmilingday.佳作欣赏（2）Andlastbutnottheleast,Ialwayssmileatmyself.ThemomentthatIdoabadjoborcomeacrosssomedifficulties,Ismileatmyselfandfeelconfidentaboutmyselfinaminute.OnlythenwillIbeabletogetoveralltheobstacles.Soit’ssmilingthatleadsmetosuccess.Shortlyspeaking,Icannotemphasizethesignificanceofsmilingtoomuch,andit’shightimethatIsmiledateveryoneinmylifetoshowmykindness.高考书面表达评分原则高考书面表达评分标准我们的建议：（加大信息输入量，提高语言产出能力。事实表明，大量的语言信息输入在有效策略的指导下才可能演化为真正的语言经验和良好的语言意识，语篇意识。使学生在“活学”中“活用”。建议教师们在高中英语教学中，指导学生多阅读英语报刊文章，特别要关注与现实生活密切的文章，读写结合，提高教学效益。高三不看（英语报）更待何时？鼓励学生多读名著简写本，背诵经典文章。学习英语没有任何的masterkey。背诵不失是一种十分有效的方法。---09高考命题组专家）（我平常看的课外书和大家差不多，但我还看些英语报