12月英语六级图画作文2015年12月英语六级图画作文范文【作文题目】：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthengiveyourcomments.WriteyouressayonAnswerSheet1.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.【审题构思】这是一篇图画类作文，要求考生描述图画，并做出评论。此类作文一般为三段式。即第一段简单描述图画的内容及内涵，第二段就图画的内容展开评论，并表明自己的观点，第三段重申自己的`看法并提出建议。考生在评论和表明自己的观点时，一定要思路清晰，且要表达清楚。【参考范文】Inthepictureabove,achildfliesfromonecagetotheothercagelikeabird.Onecageisnamedschool,andtheotherisnamedcramschool.Whatasarcasticpicture.Thereisnofreedomleftforthechildrenwhocannotenjoythesupposedcheerfulvacation.WhycannotthechildrenenjoythevacationthatbelongstothemWhopushthechildrenfromonecagetotheotherWhatshouldwedotohelpthetrappedchildrenThethreequestionssolved,theabovepicturewillnotexistanymore.Theanswertothefirstquestionishiddenwiththesuperficialonebeingacquiringmoreknowledge,andthefundamentaloneisthatparentsdemandmorescoresfromtheirchildren.Theyexpecttheirchildrentobeabletoscoremorethroughattendingvariouscramschoolsatthecostoftheirchildren’ssupposedlysplendidvocation.Soitistheparentswhopursuequicksuccessthatpushthechildrenfromonecagetotheother.Tofreethechildren,theparentsshouldputemphasisonthechildren’sphysicalandmentalhealthratherthanthescore.AsisknowntoallthatpursuitofhighscoreshaslongbeenaphenomenoninChina,thecauseofthisphenomenonishardtobeuprooted.Therefore,weshouldemancipatethechildreninthemindandreturnthejoyofchildhoodtochildrengradually.【高分词汇与词组】supposed本该的trapped受困的attendvariouscramschools参加各种辅导班pursuequicksuccess急功近利【句型替换】Tofreethechildren,theparentsshouldputemphasisonthechildren’sphysicalandmentalhealthratherthanthescore.=Tosetthechildrenfree,theparentsshouldemphasizethechildren’sphysicalandmentalwell-beingratherthanthescore.AsisknowntoallthatpursuitofhighscoreshaslongbeenaphenomenoninChina,thecauseofthisphenomenonishardtobeuprooted.=AsweallknowthatpursuinghighscoreshaslongbeenaphenomenoninChina,thecaus