大学英语作文2500字：天堂之旅backfromparadisewhereami?whatamidoing?ifeelasiffloatinginthesoftair,nopain,evennosense.throughthedarkness,icanseeafaintlight.however,ifeelverysafe,likeababyinitsmother＇swomb?iwakeup,brilliantraysoflightpiercingmyeyes.atthemoment,iamstunnedbyeverythingbeforemy,likefloatingribbons,areembellishedwithgreenwillowsandredpeachblossoms.mountains,shroudedinmist,aresurroundedbytheflowingwater,pureandblue.allthesecomposeabeautifullandscapepainting,andifeelasifihadcomeintoit.thewonderfulfeelingofbeingalone,thetwitteringofbirdsatdawnandthesightoftherisingsunshiningontreesmakemeforgeteverything.iamsointoicatedbythebreathtakingbeautythatinolongerfeelhungry,thirstyorsleepy,freeofalldesires.myspiritisgoingoutsidemybody.italk,iplay,iwatchandifeelwithmysoul.isteponthegroundandbreathetheair.everythingissocleanandwillowsswayinthebreeze,trailingtheirbranchesoverthelotuscarpetedlake.thewetgrassgivesoutadelicatefragrance.iwalkalongthecobblestonepathforalonglongtime.timestopsstill!thebeautyoftheplaceislasting.however,ibegintofeelbored.thememoryofthepastlife,fullofchallenges,competitions,laugh,painandlovehauntsusedtofightagainstfateeveryday.ienjoyedsuccessafterhundredsoffailure;ieperiencedtheprofoundsadnessatthedepartureofmybestfriend;ifelttheheartbeatingwhenitalkedtomyfirstlover;itreasuredtheleisuretimewhenigoteverythingdone.butnow,iamnotthemasterofmyownfate.ifonlytimewouldflybacksothaticouldcarefullysavourandcontemplatethebeautyoftruelife!everyoneispursuing,ifthewholeworldisperfect,what＇sthemeaningofbeingahuman?maybetakeastroll,getbored,then?ilovethesayingthat"ilongtoalleviatetheevil,buticannot,itoosuffer."paradiseisparadise.lifeisjustlife.简评本文中，作者凭借着丰富的想像力，描述了他的一次天堂之旅。作者心目中的天堂像一个世外桃源：杨柳和桃花装饰着绸带般的河流，山水环绕，湖面上点缀着莲花朵朵。作者沉浸在美景中，忘却了一切烦恼和欲望。然而，作者渐渐地对这种没有挑战、竞争，没有欢乐与痛苦的生活感到了厌烦。作者最终体会到：在这个并不完美的世界中，种种悲欢离合，成功与失败才是真实的生活，真实的美。本文非常富有哲理性，表现了作者对人生的思考，对生活的热爱。在写作技巧方面，几句写景的句子结构平衡，用词优美：rivers，likefloatingribbons，areembellishedwithgreenwillowsandredpeachblossoms．mountains，shroudedinmist，aresur