雅思写作高分要点2016年雅思写作高分要点雅思写作想要得高分首先要做到写出的作文是有效的，下面小编为大家整理了雅思写作写出有效作文的五要点，仅供参考!句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素，但这并不意味着要求考生具备写长难句的能力。在追求输出像雅思阅读一样精到的语言之前，我们首先要确保的应当是写出来的句子是正确的`。有效的句子甚而段落通常应当同时满足以下五个要素：一致、连贯、简洁、强调、多样。1.一致：如句内的逻辑关系，注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.→HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s.Inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe1970shebecameafamousmusician.2.连贯：这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andaverycapableyoungwoman.→Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andverycapable.Or:Wethoughtshewasacharming,intelligent,andverycapableyoungwoman.Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butitwasnotserious.→Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butwasnotbadlyinjured.Lookingoutofthewindow,thegrasslandstretchesasfarastheeyecanreach.→Lookingoutofthewindow,wecanseethegrasslandstretchingasfarastheeyecanreach.Or:Outsidethewindow,thegrasslandstretchesasfarastheeyecanreach.Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.→Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting.Or:Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.3.简洁：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。Itwassmallinsizeandblueincolour.→Itwassmallandblue.HeusuallylikestodrinkallkindsofwinesthatareproducedinFrance.→HeprefersFrenchwines.4.强调：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(mainidea)，每个段落都要有主题句(topicsentence)一般，每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。Heismodestandhardworkingandisagoodstudent.→Heisagoodstudent,modestandhardworking.Thereisabigtree,whichissaidtobe300yearsold,inthetemple.→Inthetemplethereisabigtree,whichissaidtobe300yearsold.Atthesightofthedisorderlycrowd,hewasawarethatsomethingbadwouldbepossible.→Themomenthesawthedisorderlycrowd,heknewthatsomethingbadwouldhappen.5.多样：中文重重复，英文重替代，中英差异使然。