2023年全国高考新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷读后续写真题WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewas银匠asilversmith)(inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”again,Iwroteanditagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.续写材料梗概:本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者上中学时,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作,于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中感觉虽然很累,但是没有放弃,坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时,作者感到写作让他很快乐,他已经不在乎输赢了。审题构思:1.续写线索比赛消息传来-作者获奖-高兴-颁奖典礼感谢老师-颁奖后来到老师办公室-老师告诉作者坚持写作的重要性-作者转变态度,表达了对写作的热爱-作者写作取得了成功-感激老师。本续写材料主要围绕两条线索展开:(1)故事线;(2)情感线,即故事情节如何展开,以及作者的内心情感如何发生变化等两个方面。考生可以划出文章的关键词和短语,以便顺利行文。2.续写步骤Para1:由Para1首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”和Para2首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知,Para可描1写作者获得比赛一等奖的激动,在学校颁奖典礼上,作者感激社会