雅思写作典型病句分析2014雅思写作典型病句分析TaskTwoSomefamousuniversitieslowertheiracademicrequirementstoenrollstudentswhohaveoutstandingathletictalents.Towhatextentdoyouagreewiththispractice?Givereasonsbasedonyourexperience.Youshouldwriteatleast250wordsandspendapproximately40minutesonthistask.对病句的点评误：Loweringtheacademicstandardstoacceptthespecialstudentcanleadtodeclinethequalityofeducationandtodestroytherespectionofcollege.decline之后应有介词in或of。destroy是动词，此处应用名词destruction，与前面的decline平行，均为leadto的宾语。Respection完全不对，根本没有这个单词。作者想用respect(礼貌、尊敬)，但仍不对，要用reputation(声誉)。但destruction与reputation又不是很好的搭配，因此应将destruction改为damage。正：Loweringtheacademicstandardstoacceptspecialstudentscanleadtothedeclineofthequalityofeducationandthedamageofthereputationoftheschool.(damage为名词，与decline平行)或：Loweringtheacademicstandardstoacceptspecialstudentscanleadtothedeclineofthequalityofeducationanddamagethereputationoftheschool.(damage为动词，与leadto平行)误：Their(otherstudents’)opportunitiesthatenteringcollegemaybeoccupiedbythosestudentswithathletictalents.作者有用定语修饰opportunities的意图，但因语法错误而效果极差。其实很简单，用toenter即可。beoccupied应改为takenaway。正：Theiropportunitiestoentercollegemaybetakenawaybythosestudentswithathletictalents.误：Theuniversityalsobenefititselfbyhisathleticfameduetoenrolandtrainthestudentswhohavespecialathletictalents.Forexample,OxfordandCambridgeareveryfamousintheworld.Thereasonmaybeownedalittletotheirboatracegames.这是两个很好的`句子，因为其中一个是“论点”，另一个是“论据”。这种用事例、数据等证据来支持论点的做法使人感到客观。很多考试的作文会由于英文水平欠佳、缺乏论据、受汉语表达方式的影响等原因而显得口号多，实际内容不扎实，得不到理想的分数。此句有若干错误，请对比前后两句。