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独立5-现象证明P212010.10.31NADoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Peoplearenoweasiertobecomeeducatedthaninthepast.Educationisthefoundationofacountry.Peopletodayhaveastrongerconcept(搭配不当,改为sense)ofbeingeducatedthaninthepast.Iagreewiththestatementthatpeoplegainaneasieraccesstoallkindsofeducationsatcurrenttimes.Firstly,therearemuchmoreschoolsavailabletodaythaninthepast.Nomatterwhereyoulive,inbigcitiesorinthecountryside,thelocalgovernmentspendsalargeamountofmoneyontheconstructionsofvarioustypesofschools,suchasprimaryschools,middleschools,highschoolsandevenschoolsforadults.Moreandmoreuniversitiesandcollegeshavebeenbuilttoensurehighereducationfortopstudents.Ifyouwanttostudyinschools,youwillalwaysfindaproperonetoattend.Secondly,theteachingapproachdiversifies(therearediversifiedteachingapproaches).Exceptfor(Inadditionto包括在内)blackboardandchalks,manyadvancedteachingdevicesarebeingusedtodayinmostschools,includingcomputers,multi-mediaandsomeotherinstruments.Moreover,labsandlibrarieshavealsocomeintouseforstudentstostudydeeperandwider(whowanttomakeadeeperandwiderstudyonthefieldstheyareinterestedin).Whatismore,theteachers'teachinglevelsaregreatlyimprovedbycommunicatingwithothereducatorsfromallovertheworld.Thetechnologybecomesmoredevelopedthaninthepast,soitiseasiernowtostudy.Thirdly,peoplehaveequalrightstoreceiveeducation.Asweallknow,peopleinthepastwereinterriblediscriminationbecauseoftheirsexandrace(manypeoplesuchaswomenandtheblackpeopleweredeniedtherighttoeducationbecausetheywerediscriminatedagainstinthesocietybecauseoftheirsexandrace.两句合起来)Forexample,womenandblackpeoplewereusedtobeconsideredaspeopleinlowerclassesorevenslavesandweren'tallowedtogotoschool.However,theyhaveequalrightstostudyinschoolsnowadays.(要回到主题,和更容易接受教育要直接联系起来,所以再加一句)Obviously,thesepeoplesurlyhaveeasieraccesstoeducation.Tosumup,almosteveryonetodayhasequalrightstogotoallkindsofschoolswithdiversifiedteachingapproaches.Sopeopledohaveaneasierwaytoreceiveeducationnowthaninpasttimes.Thereasonsabovefirmlys