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LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsThedisposableplasticbagshavebeenusedwidely.Theyareusedinmanyplaces,suchassupermarkets,farms,etc(etc可以去掉,然后第一句和第二句用连接词可以合并成一句).Peoplethinkthatthedisposableplasticbagisconvenientandcheap(考虑下怎样才能更好的把第二句和第三句连接起来,比如在第二句和第三句之间加些内容).However,asweknow,acoinhastwosides.Thedisposableplasticbagscausealotofproblems.Firstly,Thedisposableplasticbagsaredifficulttobedegraded.Itwilltakemanyyearstobedegraded(这两句话可以合成一句话,而且这两句话有重复的嫌疑)Sothereis(is改为wouldproduce比较好)seriousenvironmentalpollution.Secondly,ifthedisposableplasticbagsaredegraded,theywillgeneratealotofharmfulgas.Thegascanletushaveavarietyofdiseases(这句话再修改下,不太符合英文的比较习惯).Thirdly,ifthedisposableplasticbags(加个动词arepouredintotheriver,willbecomeariverpollution(句子的主语不见了,句子意思不通,中国式英语,再思考下).Overall,limitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbagsisnecessaryanditisofgreatsignificance.Itisbeneficialtotheenvironmentalprotection.Itishelpfulformorepeopletodeveloptheconsciousnessofenvironmentalprotection(这三句话用连接词连接起来,因为都是讲限制使用塑料袋的好处,最好把more去掉,因为文中没有可对比的人员).