SectionⅣWriting读后续写Thementalkedforhoursonend.Theyspokeoftheirwivesandfamilies,theirhomes,theirjobs,theirinvolvementinthemilitaryservice.Everyafternoonwhenthemaninthebedbythewindowcouldsitup,hewouldpassthetimebydescribingtohisroommateallthethingshecouldseeoutsidethewindow.Themanintheotherbedbegantoliveforthoseone-hourperiodswherehisworldwouldbebroadenedbyalltheactivityandcolouroftheworldoutside.Thewindowoverlookedaparkwithalovelylake.Ducksplayedonthewaterwhilechildrensailedtheirmodelboats.Youngloverswalkedarminarmamongflowersofeverycolourandafineviewofthecityskylinecouldbeseeninthedistance.Asthemanbythewindowdescribedallthisindetail,themanontheothersideoftheroomwouldclosehiseyesandimaginethebeautifulscene.Onewarmafternoonthemanbythewindowdescribedaparadepassingby.Althoughtheothermancouldn’theartheband—hecouldseeit.Inhismind’seyeasthegentlemanbythewindowdescribeditexcitedly.Unexpectedly,astrangethoughtenteredhishead:WhyshouldhehaveallthepleasureofseeingeverythingwhileInevergettoseeanything?Itdidn’tseemfair.Asthethoughtappearedthemanfeltashamedatfirst.Butasthedayspassedandhemissedseeingmoresights,hisenvyturnedhimsourandhefoundhimselfunabletosleep.Heshouldbebythatwindow—thatthoughtnowcontrolledhislife.Lateonenightashelaystaringattheceiling,themanbythewindowbegantocough.Hestruggledtolookoutofthewindowbesidethebed.Muchtohissurprise,itfacedablankwall.写作指导2.分析关键词和所给段落首句,展开想象合理续写续写第一段首句是:一天深夜,当他躺在床上盯着天花板的时候,靠窗户的那个人开始咳嗽起来。根据本句及前文所述,可预测本段应该写靠窗户病人的病情十分危急,这位心生嫉妒的病人的做法以及由此产生的后果。由于续写第二段开头提及他看到了窗外的真实景象,因此,本段最后要提到病友去世,他要求移到窗边病床上。续写第二段首句是:他挣扎着看向床边的窗户外,令他吃惊的是,窗外只是一堵空墙。由此可知,这让他意识到,病友所描述的一切都来自想象。因此,本段应当主要写病友为他编织了一幅美丽的画面,鼓励他,让他能够更积极地面对病情,以及得知真相后他复杂的心理感受。高分范文Hestruggledtolookoutofthewindowbesidethebed.Muchtohissurprise,itfacedablankwall.Atthatmoment,heseemedtounderstandeverything,buthecouldnotsayit,justregrettingthathehadnotmovedwhenhiscompanionwassufferingfromillness.Hefeltashamed.Hiscompanionhadmadewhitelieseverydayjusttoencouragehim.Afeelingofregret,ofgratitude,roseatthemoment.名