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雅思写作之-十大“见官死”开头“见官死”开头之一：废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆)典型失败案例：Topic1－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?Thistopicisveryinteresting.I’mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseI’malsoacollegestudentandI’mnotmarried……修改方案：开门见山直奔主题Inmyopinion,itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried.Topic2－Willmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation?(雅思真题)Ok,thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First,letmetellyouastory:Ihaveafriend,helikesgoontheinternetverymuch.Everyday,heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Topic3－TheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionOh,thistopicissurelyveryimportant.Isn’tit?Ofcourse!It’sreallyveryveryimportant!“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)典型失败案例：Topic1－ThehappiestmomentinyourlifeInourlife,therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily……Topic2－ThepopulationproblemThepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.Topic3－Istherefairnessintoday’sbusinessworld?Ithinkintoday’ssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings……Topic4－TheadvantageofbeinganicepersonBeinganicepersonhavemanyadvantage.Ibelieveifapeoplealwaysdobadthings,hewillget“baoying”.“见官死”开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆)典型失败案例：Topic－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?Ithinkthistopicisveryhardtosay.BecauseIamstillverylittle,only17,andnotmarried,sothistopicisverydifficultforme……“见官死”开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)典型失败案例：Topic－Itissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?(雅思真题)Ithinktosuccess,wemusthavealotofimportantqualities.Tohavetheseimportantqualities,wemustlearnalotofthings,forexample,English,musictools,andetc.Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers,ourfriendsandfrombooks.Allinall,wecanlea
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