会计学commonerrorsinbusinesswriting2.Grammermistakes1)主谓一致e.g.ithave2）动词原形不能直接放在句首做主语e.g.Fallasleepisharderandharder.Fallingasleepingisharderandharder.3）某些(mǒuxiē)代词做主语，谓语动词和相应的名词形式应该是单数。anyone，anybody，everyone，everybodye.g.Everyonehadtheirhomeworkdone.(wrong)Everyonehadhis/herhomeworkdone.4)词性错误e.g.choose/choiceselect/selection3.wrongsentences1)平行结构。e.g.Tosayisonething,doingisanother.(wrong)Tosayisonething,todoisanother.2）不完整(wánzhěng)句子。e.g.Equippedwithourlatestdeveloped...Becausethedepartmentcouldnotpayforthenewcomputer.4.wrongpuctuation1)正确(zhèngquè)使用和书写标点符号2）在商务英语写作中，除了营销宣传文档中使用感叹号，其余基本不用。Note广告(guǎnggào)文档写作商品广告(CommodityAdvertisement)1常用的词语及句型attractivedesign款式新颖withalong-standingreputation久负盛名(jiǔfùshèngmíng)exquisiteanddurable精美耐用goodsgenuineandpricereasonable货真价实unparalleledbothinbeautyandinart制作精良，外观华美，无与伦比theworldfamousbrand世界著名品牌image形象Thechoiceisyours,Thehonorisours.Pleasedonotleaveittoolate.事不宜迟。Morechoices,moreenjoyment.语意双关的使用：Adealwithusmeansagooddealtoyou.译文：和我们做买卖意味着您做了一笔好买卖。该句的妙处在于(zàiyú)很好地利用了句中deal的三种含义，“做买卖”、“一笔好买卖”和“许多”。agooddeal构成一个绝妙的双关。一般疑问句通常用在广告(guǎnggào)的前面。例1Haveyoueverdreamedofascendingthestepsofagreattemplebuilttothegods?（旅行社广告(guǎnggào)）您是否梦想过登上为众神修建的宏伟庙宇的台阶？例2Canatired,overworkedvoicecommandattentioninclass?一个疲惫、过劳的声音能吸引全班的注意力吗？疑问句容易激起人们的反应，特别是广告标题或正文的开头使用(shǐyòng)疑问句，能激发读者的好奇心理，增加他们的阅读兴趣。如下列一则黄油广告：What’ssospecialaboutLurparkDanisbbutter?Well,canyourememberwhatbutterusedtotastelike-realfreshfromhousebutter?Doyourememberhowyouusedtoenjoyitwhenyouwereyoung?Today,thetasteofLurparkbringitallbacktoyou—that’swhyit’ssospecial.这则广告多次使用(shǐyòng)疑问句，从第一句“黄油的特点是什么？”入手，一环扣一环，抓住读者的心理，突出了这种黄油的特点。如用陈述句则平淡无奇。这种使用(shǐyòng)疑问句，抓住读者注意力的广告彼彼皆是。比较级比较级在广告中用得非常(fēicháng)多，这是由于英语广告中有大量的形容词和副词做修饰语的缘故。例1Todayinbusinessfastisnolongerfastenough,evenfasterisstilltooslowtokeeppacewiththeincredibledemandsplacedonpeopleandthecomputerstheyworkwith.That'sonereasonwhyIBMdevelopedP60/D.60MHz64-bitPentiumChipcomputerssofast,sopowerful,itmak