研究生写作UnityandCoherence学习教案.pptx
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研究生写作UnityandCoherence学习教案.pptx

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会计学Unit3UnityandCoherence1.Whatisunity?2.Whatiscoherence?AmodelparagraphforunityandcoherenceAnalysis3.Theeighthandtheninthsentencesinterpretandanalyzethelimitationsofthehumanbodyandprovethestrengthofthetopicsentence.They,further,leadthemainideaintoaconcludingthought.4.Finally,thetenthsentenceconcludeswiththeideathatthehumanbodyshouldbewellpreservedforaproperfunctioningofthesystemandthatahealthymindcanworkonlyinahealthybody.5.Thustheparagraph,TheHumanBody,isaunifiedandcoherentparagraph.Exercise1:Readandrewritethefollowingparagraphstomakethemunifiedandcoherent.AnalysisRevisedVersion2.MoonLanding1)Themoonhasalwaysbeenanobjectofinteresttohumanbeings.2)Untilthe1960s,gettingtherewasonlyadream.3)Somethoughtthatpeoplecouldneverreachthemoon.4)NeilArmstrongsteppedontothelunarsurfacein1969.5)Moonlandingswillbecomeroutinetothegeneralpublic.AnalysisRevisedVersion3.GirlsandComputerTechnologgy1)Duetosex-rolestereotyping,girls'experienceswithcomputersintheclassroomleadtounsatisfactoryresults.2)Girlsareoftennotaggressiveinbullyingotherstudents.3)Theylosetheirrightfulturnatthecomputer.4)Whentheyworkattheterminal,theyfindtheydon'tliketheviolenceinmanycomputerprograms.5)Theystopusingthecomputer.6)Bythetimegirlsenterjuniorhighschool,theystartlosinginterestincomputer.7)Whengirlsaregoodatthecomputer,theydon'tgetspecialrecognitionfrompeers.8)Girlsareassumednottobethebrightestmathstudents.9)Theyareoftennotplacedincomputerprogrammingcourses.10)Becauseoflackofinterestincomputers,andlimitedcomputerexperience,girlsmaybeunpreparedforthehigh-techprofessionalworldofthefuture.AnalysisRevisedVersion3.WaystoAchievecoherenceWhatarelinkers?Linkersarewordsthatrelateoneideaorsentenceofthetextwithanother.Theyconnecttheideaslogically.Whyaretheyused?Theygivedirectiontothewriter.Theyarealsousedtoguidethereaderthroughhisthoughts.Theymakethemeaningspecific.Howtochoosealinker?Meaningisthefirstandthemostimportantcriterioninchoosingalinker.Thesecondisthelogicalrelationthatneedstobemadedistinctly