写作基本要领写作基本要领?使用规范的句子1.完整1)意义的完整BikesaresopopularinChina.(BikesaresopopularinChinathatalmosteveryfamilyhasatleastone.)2)结构的完整指代不明Itisincredibletomanypeople.Cigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.(Itisincredibletomanypeoplethatcigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.)省略错误IsaidIhavemorerespectforhimthanhiswife.(IsaidIhavemorerespectforhimthanforhiswife.)断句不严Wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar,thereweremanyattractivemodels.(Wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar,forthereweremanyattractivemodels.)or(Wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar.Thereweremanyattractivemodels.)2.连贯1)代词指向不明确Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butitwasnotserious.(Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butwasnotseriouslyhurt.)2)不定式、分词、动名词的逻辑主语与句子主语不一致Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,persistenceisneeded.(Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,oneneedstobepersistent.)3)结构不平行Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemployed.(Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;nowitistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.)Itwasbothalongceremonyandverytedious.(Theceremonywasbothlongandtedious.)4)主次不分，重点不突出Thecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyearandthecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexaminationandtheyneglecttheirhealthandsothenewspaperscarryarticlesurgingteachersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.(Asthecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyear,thecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexamination,neglectingtheirhealth.Inviewofthis,thenewspaperscarryarticlesurgingteachersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.)3.简练1)删除（多余成分）Thedistantexplosionwasaudibletotheear.(Thedistantexplosionwasaudible.)TherearefourcompaniesinShanghai,andanyofthemcansupplyuswithspareparts.(AnyofthefourcompaniesinShanghaicansupplyuswithspareparts.)2)替换（用词或词组替代从句）Thebottlesthatareplacedontheshelfcontainsomechemicalsthathavebeennewlydiscovered.(Thebottlesontheshelfcontainnewchemicals.)Mr.Li,whoismyfavoriteprofessor,hasreceivedaDistinguishedTeacherAward.(Mr.Li,myfavoriteprofessor,hasreceivedaDistinguishedTe