一、课堂讲评2012全国卷=2\*ROMAN\*MERGEFORMATII短文改错和完型填空（一）短文改错DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.76.______Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlive77.______withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango78.______withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.79.______Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.80.______Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall81.______outtoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no82.______drinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Third,weshouldfind83.______waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath84.______waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.85.______Sincerely,LiHua评析：=1\*GB3\*MERGEFORMAT①大意：高考一卷短文改错内容是节约汽油和节电，此文为节水给编辑写的一封信，提出水是动物生存和工农业发展之必须。但形势日益严峻，因水资源越来越短缺。所提建议为：a.植树b.节约饮用水，不能让自来水变成常流水c.洗涮用水和洗澡水的重复利用。=2\*GB3\*MERGEFORMAT②改错策略：a.定语从句考察（较难）...especiallybathwaterforwhichisquitealot，应该去掉for。我们应当找到利用洗衣水和利用消耗量很大的洗澡水的方法。考生要意识到which前介词for的多余，因which指代洗澡水，是洗澡水“量大”，因而和for没有任何关系。b.指代错误（较难）。Manycountries属第三人称，因此代词应为they而非we，把we改为they。C.“used”过去分词作后置定语较难，被修饰词为water,即在洗东西和洗澡中“被”用掉的水，因此要用used作后置定语。d.选择连词（较难）。植树与节水的关系：之所以植树是因为树有助于节水，因此把though改为because、as或since，但for不合适，因为for表原因时，前常用逗号分开，起补充说明作用。e.时态改错（较易），但seemed容易变为seem,应当根据主语为第三人称变成seems。f.第一人称指代较易，you后加my,opinion可数名词不可单独存在，此处特指我的意见。g.固定搭配neither后的or改为nor（较易）。i.冠词考查较易。aproblem改为theproblem，特指上文水短缺的问题。j.复数名词表泛指（较易）animal改为animals，可数名词不可单独存在，此处前面是“We”，所以后面用“animal”的复数形式表泛指。=2\*GB3\*MERGEFORMAT②答案：76.opinion前加my77.animal---animals78.or—nor79.seemed—seems80we--they81.a--the/this/that82.though--because/since/as83.正确84.using--used85.去掉for（二）完型填空AroundtwentyyearsagoIwaslivinginYork.21IhadalotofexperienceandaMaster'sdegree,Icouldnotfind22work.Iwas23aschoolbustomakeendsmeetand24withafriendofmine,forIhadlostmyflat．Ihad25fiveinterviews(面试)withacompanyandonedaybetweenbusrunstheycalledtosayIdidnot26thejob．“Whyhasmylifebecomeso27?”Ithoughtpainfully.AsIpulledthebusoverto28alittlegirl,shehandedmeanearning29Ishouldke