读后续写fathersbestflowers学习教案.pptx
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读后续写fathersbestflowers学习教案.pptx

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会计学第二节:读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文(duǎnwén),根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。注意:所续写短文(duǎnwén)的词数应为150左右;应使用5个以上短文(duǎnwén)中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Howtochoosetheunderlinedkeywordsinyourwriting?Howtomakefulluseofthegivensentencesandtheplot?Howtomakethestorycoherentandlogical?MyDad’sBestFlowersWhat'sthewritingstyleofthepassage?A.Narration记叙文B.Exposition说明文C.Argumentation议论文AstoryWho:Iremembermyfirsthomewasasmallapartmentonthesecondfloorwithalovelyandspaciousbalcony.Whenmymomwasbusyinthekitchensheletmestayonthebalconywatchingthekidsplayinginthestreet.OnthatbalconyIplayedsometimeswithmyeldersister,Maria.Shewassevenyearsoldandwhenmymomwasabsentshewaslikeamothertome.Thebalconywasagreathobbyplaceformyfather.Afterhisworkheusedtogrowcarnations(康乃馨)inflowerboxes.Hiscarnationswerered,pinkandwhite,andeveryoneappreciatedthemfortheirbeauty.Hetookcareofthemwithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefullywithhisflowerslikeamothertakingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhoursobservinghimandhislovelyflowerswithpatience.Hewasalwaysdoingsomethingonthatbalcony.Hewaswateringthemeveryday,cleaningthebalconyfloor,changingthepottingsoilandwhenthestems(茎)werethick,strongandhighenough,hestartedhisimprovementoperationlikeadoctor.Mydadtookatinyknifeandwithhislefthandheheldthestemofthecarnationandmeasuredtheheight.Thenhemadeasmallmarkonthestemwithhisfinger.Afterwardshemadeasharpcutwiththeknife,justenoughtofitinagrainofbarley(插穗的芽).Thenhebandagedthestemwithasmallbandage.Hisjobwasthentowatertheplantsandtotakecareofthem.“Nooneshouldtouchthem”,hesaidtomom.Everyday,whenhecamehomefromworkhewentstraighttothebalcony.Momusedtotellus:“Donottouchdaddy’sflowers.”Forusitwasafascinatingexperiencetowatchhowthesmallstemsweregrowingandmakingflowers.Whenthecarnationshadgrownbigenough,mydadenjoyedwatchingthemeveryday.Wethekidsdidtoo.Hetookcareofthemwithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefullywithhisflowerslikeamothertakingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhourso