本课件为基于精确校对的word书稿制作的“逐字编辑”课件，使用时欲修改课件，请双击对应内容，进入可编辑状态。目录高中英语第一册(必修1)第1讲Module1MyFirstDayatSeniorHigh第1讲│美文欣赏写作要点：1．表明自己的看法；2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3．提出至少两条建议。要求：1．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。3．书写须清晰、工整。Hi，TigerMom，WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideais___________________________________【精彩美文】Hi，TigerMom，WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission，developmentinwisdom，emotion，health，andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall­Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore，punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.Moreimportantly，letherlivelikealovelygirl；letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities；andlethermakemistakesofherownastheteenagersoftendo.【全品点睛】①行文逻辑：提出观点→解释原因→给出建议。较好地使用了连接词语，如：furthermore，moreimportantly等。②词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇。如：evaluate，universityadmission，developmentinwisdom，neverbeignored，turnoutnottobe,bynomeans等。③句式句法：运用了多样化的句式和句法结构。如：主语从句：Whatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzle…；表语从句：Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso./Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheir…；宾语从句：…thatyoutakeyourfriends'advice；状语从句：Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactor…/astheywereexpected以及therebe句型：Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.等。6.___________adj.尴尬的，难堪的→__________v.使困窘，使局促不安→_____________adj.令人为难的→embarrassmentn.窘迫；为难7.__________n.行为，举止→behavev.举动，举止8.__________n.描述；形容；描写→describevt.描写，记述9._______vt.使(人)印象深刻；使铭记→__________n.印象，感想→impressiveadj.令人印象深刻的10.__________n．纠正，改正→correctadj.正确的→_______v．改正，纠正，批改11.__________v.鼓励，激励→__________adj.鼓舞人心的→___________adj.受到鼓舞的，更有信心的→encouragementn.鼓励，奖励12．enjoymentn.享受，乐趣→_______v.享受，喜欢→________adj.令人愉快的，有乐趣的13．fluencyn.流利，流畅→_______ad