雅思写作范文精讲：独居的好坏Insomecountries,manymorepeoplearechoosingtolivealonenowadaysthaninthepast.Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment?构思过程：独居，也就是一个人生活，显然有利有弊，如果选择一边倒观点显然都站不住脚，很难论证，需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处，一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向，建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的角度出发，层次分明论证清晰，值得大家学习。Introduction1)背景导入，说尤其在发达国家的大城市，最近几年独居变得更为常见。Inrecentyearsithasbecomefarmorenormalforpeopletolivealone,particularlyinlargecitiesinthedevelopedworld.(句型结构：Itadj.forsb.todosth.后置状语补充，注意完成时hasbecome;注意particularly的用法，举特例方便直接，类似especially但语气更强;inthedevelopedworld比indevelopedcountries更地道;farmore修饰normal代入感强)2)观点句，我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。Inmyopinion,thistrendcouldhavebothpositiveandnegativeconsequencesinequalmeasure.(句型结构：简单句后置状语;虚拟语气couldhave;consequences高分词;inequalmeasure高分搭配)MainParagraphs11)段首概括，一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。Theriseinone-personhouseholdscanbeseenaspositiveforbothpersonalandbroadereconomicreasons.(句型结构：被动后置状语并列;主语theriseinone-personhouseholds替换morepeoplechoosetolivealone，地道高分搭配准确;seenas语法得分点;personal&broadereconomic词汇得分点)2)分论点1：个人层面上，独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人更独立自强(常见观点)Onanindividuallevel,peoplewhochoosetolivealonemaybecomemoreindependentandself-reliantthanthosewholivewithfamilymembers.(句型结构：前置状语主语who从句谓语比较级宾语who从句，高分复合句;self-reliant高分词，展示词汇量)3)举例论证线性推理展开：独居年轻人需要学做饭，做家务，付账单，管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展Ayoungadultwholivesalone,forexample,willneedtolearntocook,clean,paybillsandmanagehisorherbudget,allofwhicharevaluablelifeskills;anincreaseinthenumberofsuchindividualscancertainlybeseenasapositivedevelopment.(句型结构：主语从句插入语不定式并列宾语allofwhich从句;简单分句被动;valuable得分词;anincrease语法得分点;suchindividuals指代准确，语法和词汇得分点)4)分论点2：经济角度上看，独居的趋势会导致住房需求增加(加分观点)Fromaneconomicperspective,thetrendtowardslivingalonewillresultingreaterdemandforhousing.(句型结构：前置状语后置定语简单句;trendtowardsliving搭配准确，词汇和语法得分点;resultin学术搭配，词汇得分点;demandforhousing词汇得分点)5)举例说明展开：这样会让建筑公司，房产中介和其它依赖业主购买产品的公司获益。Thisislikelytobenefittheconstructionindustry,estateagentsandawholehostofothercompaniesthatrelyonhomeownerstobuytheirproductsorservices.(句型结构：简单句宾语并列宾语that从