如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”那么,英语作文如何才能得高分呢?以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。1.改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。试比较:(原文)MybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycletheotherday.(修正)TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.(原文)Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.(修正)Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如:(1)强调句(原文)Thedoghassavedmylittlesisterbravely.(修正)Itisthedogthathassavedmylittlesisterbravely.(2)主从复合句(原文)Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.(修正)Whatwehadtodowastostandthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语(原文)Thedriverescapedanddidn’tstop,helefttheoldmanlyingontheroad.(修正)Thedriverescapedwithoutstopping,leavingtheoldmanlyingontheroad.(4)倒装句(原文)Iwenttobedat11:30.(修正)Notuntil11:30didIgotobed.(5)省略句(原文)Whileyouarecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.(修正)Whilecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:(原文)Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.(修正)Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.(原文)Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.(修正)Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing.4.注意连接词与句子的运用。以2001年高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上“YouwanttoknowsomethingaboutwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?”这句话起承上启下的作用,使文章过渡自然;再如,用“Whatwasworse?”引出减负前,晚上还要做作业,就寝时间11:30等要点。又如,“NowIhavemorefreetime...”可引出减负后的情况。另外,在信的结尾,可用“Howaboutyou?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.”来自然地结束这封信。5.使用过渡词语。写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有:并列递进:and,also,aswellas,besides,what’smore,furthermore,moreover,etc.转折:but,yet,however,although,nevertheless,inspiteof,afterall,etc.因果:because,as,for,since,forthisreason,becauseof,so,therefore,thus,asaresult,etc.对比:or,otherwise,like,unlike,onthecontrary,while,ontheotherhand,insteadof,etc.总结:inall,inbrief,onthewhole,inshort,ingeneral,inoneword,etc.总之,要使文章的层次高,可读性强,考生应增加些较高级的词汇与复杂的结构,并运用恰当的连接词和复合句,只有这样,才能在考试中取得理想的成绩。