四级作文辅导讲座（一）评判作文基本表达万能理由5.人的身体健康：health,disease,strong,strength,energetic6.娱乐：colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relax/tired,boring,lonely7.环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty8.安全和危险：safe,danger,risk9.经验：experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety10.人际：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely对比型话题实例18分的作文14分的作文Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.注：1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）6.Moreover表示递进Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.注：promising有前途的apromisingyoungman实例214分作文Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.（承）注：1.本段总分总结构2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat3.withthedevelopmentof...随着……的发展4.what'smore递进关系，moreover5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.（转）注：1.But转折词（信号词）2.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比3.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge获取知识acquire/getknowledge4.knowsnothing