实用英语写作：授课教案第六次授课章节英语写作基础知识第六讲授课主体教师+学生周数第6周学时数2课题TheSentenceIIIHowtoMakeaBeautifulSentence教学目的及要求TomasterthefourprinciplesforEnglishsentencewriting.1.Completeness2.Unity3.Coherence4.Variety教学内容要点1.Completeness2.Unity3.Coherence4.Variety重难点分析1.Coherence2.Variety教学思路或教法设计I.Revision:themembersofEnglishsentenceandthebasicsentencepatternsII.Warming-uppractice:III.Presentation（讲授：教师+学生）1.Completeness2.Unity3.Coherence4.VarietyV.CommentsandConclusion（评价及结论）VI.Assignment（作业）Tocorrectthemistakesinthelasthomework,ChineseLearningFeverintheWorldandrewriteit.MechanicofEnglishwritingVI.Revision:themembersofEnglishsentenceandthebasicsentencepatternsII.Warming-uppractice:一篇好的文章自然离不开好的句子，而写好句子包括两方面：一是语法正确，二是修辞得体。中国的学生，往往按照说中文的方式组织英文句子，造成语法错误和修辞错误。例如：（1）Tomwithhiselderbrother,bothlookingveryexcited,werevery,verytalkativethatnight.（主谓不一致）（2）Hello,Paul,Idon'texpecttomeetyouhere.（时态有错误）（3）Fishweretoastedbytheboysontheendoflongpointedsticks.（修辞不当，容易产生歧义）（4）Hewillbeheretomorrowafternooniscertain.（主语从句缺少引导词that，或是iscertain多余）可见，写好一个句子并不简单，要注意很多方面。III.Presentation1.Completeness(1)CompletenessofsentenceelementsEg:1)Faulty:Althoughhedoesnothingtoimprovethem.Revised:Heisalwayscomplainingabouthisgrades,althoughhedoesnothingtoimprovethem.2)Faulty:Womenshouldbeequalwithmenhasalwaysbeenamuchcontroversialissue.Revised:Whetherwomenshouldbeequalwithmenhasalwaysbeenamuchcontroversialissue.(2)CompletenessofsentencecontentsEg:1)Faulty:MyhometownisclosertoNanjing.Revised:MyhometownisclosertoNanjingthantoShanghai/2)Faulty:Anidealfamilyshouldbeaplace.Revised:Anidealfamilyshouldbeaplacewherewecangetwarmth,help,comfortandstrength.2.UnityUnityisthefirstqualityofaneffectivesentence.-asinglecompletethought1)Faulty:BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.Revised:HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s.Inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe1970shebecameafamousmusician.