极智批改网-完美你的语言HYPERLINK"http://www.smartpigai.com"http://www.smartpigai.com极智批改网-权威专家-资深外教-手工批改作文批改-口语诊断-文书润色完美你的语言网址HYPERLINK"http://www.smartpigai.com"http://www.smartpigai.com微博@SmartPigai批改微信PerfectEnglish托福TPO第26套综合写作真实批改报告订单编号：131130809110221684736题型：托福综合写作题目：TPO第26套原文字数：183批改时间：2013年08月09日11：02Therearethreemainpointsmadeinthislectureto1contradictsthosediscussedin2previousreadingpart.Firstly,thearguerdeniesthe3possibiliythatzebramusselswhichhasreached4inNorthAmericafromtheiroriginalhabitatinEuropewouldbeaseriousthreattofreshwaterfishpopulationsinallofNorthAmerica.Asthearguersays,theinvasionnowcouldbestoppedbycontrollingtheshipswhichhelpedspreaditoutbytakingonballastwater.Theshipscanberequiredtorefreshtheballastwaterbeforelanding5on6theNorthAmerica,sothatthemusselscanbethrownawayandwouldnotbecome7invasioninNorthAmerica.Secondly,thearguerdisapprovesofthe8oppionthattherearenopredatorsformusselsintheirnewhabitats.Hesuggueststhatthereexists9kindsoflocalbirdswhichwillchangetheirownhabitsandeatthosemussels.Atlast,thespeaker10considersthatthemusselswouldnotnecessarilybenegativetothenewhabitats.Instead,theycanbecomepositivefactors11.Becausetheycanprovidenutrientsforthelivecreatures12inbottomseaandfeedingthem.错误归类分析：选词错误：1：批改解释：Poordiction.修改建议：counter.10:批改解释：Poorchoiceofword.修改建议：believes.冠词错误：2:批改解释：anarticleismissing.修改建议：the.6:批改解释：Notneeded.修改建议：Omit.7:批改解释：anarticleismissing.修改建议：an.拼写错误(SPL)：3:批改解释：spellingerror.修改建议：possibility.8:批改解释：Wrongspelling.修改建议：opinion.介词错误：4:批改解释：Pooruseofpreposition.修改建议：Omit.5:批改解释：Poorchoiceofpreposition.修改建议：in.单词缺失：9:批改解释：awordismissing.修改建议：different.大小写错误：11:批改解释：Capitalizationerror.修改建议：because.格式错误：12:批改解释：Poorphrasing.修改建议：atthebottomofthesea.得分3.0分（满分5分）任务完成情况DevelopmentandDetails充分阐述听力材料中的观点，并指出其与阅读短文的关系Presentedthepointsinthelectureandtherelationshiptothereading.文章组织和结构Organization&Structure能够表现出听力材料和阅读材料中的观点以及他们的关系。结构连贯清晰Clear,coherentstructurestatingthepoints