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May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.句子的种类:灵活多样,避免单一——把两个或多个名子合并为简单句1、把其中一句改为介词短语Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.→Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedtothemanloudly.2、把其中一句改为分词短语Igavethecasebacktotheman.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.→Gettingthecasebackfromme,themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.3、把两个或多个句子合并成复合句Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Onethewaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.→IwasonmywaytothecinemathisafternoonwhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffaman’sbike.4、适当选择固定句型Buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.→Butherodetoofasttohearme.Iwantedtocatchupwithhim,soIstoppedataxiquickly.→IstoppedataxiasquicklyasIcouldinordertocatchupwiththeman.5、文章结构:首尾照应,构思精巧