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时态?人称?环境多数学生吵闹adj.影响学习和休息熄灯制度为某人提供……方便某人做某事Amajorityofstudentsholdtheviewsthatontheonehand,thenoiseinthedormswillinterferetheirstudy,andontheotherhandthelights-offrulelimitstheirstudytime.(刘礼钰)Anotherimportantreasonisthatparentsalsobelieveitisofconvenienceforthemtotakecareoftheirchildren.(刘礼钰)Lotsofparentswanttorentthenearbyapartmentsfortheirchildrensothattheycantakecareoftheirchildrenconveniently.(李靖彤)4.Moststudentsthinkthedormitoriesaresonoisyforthemthattheycan’tstudyandrelaxnormally.(方青雅)Icandrawmyconclusionthatlivinginthedormsisbetterthanrentinganapartmentoutsideschool.(支金照)Inmyview,it’sofgreatbenefitforstudentstolivewiththeirfamilyforthereasonthattheycanfeelloveandcarefromtheirparents.(刘瑜)Bylivinginarentedapartment,studentscanbewelllookedafterbytheirparents.(王泓棋)Forsomestudents,theirdormsaresonoisythattheycan’tconcentrateontheirstudyandsleepwell.(叶佳丽)Mostofthestudentsreflectthattheroommatesindormsaresonoisythattheycan’tstudyeffectivelyandevencan’thaveagoodrest.What’smore,theycomplainthattheregularlight-ourtimelimitstheirstudytime.(袁仪)Moststudentsthinkthatthedormsaresonoisythattheycan’tstudyattentivelyandrestwell.(姜昀彤)5.Moststudentsaredissatisfiedwiththenoisydormsandtheruleofturningoffthelights.(龙楚翘)Asforthesestudents,theirroommatesaretoonoisyforthemtostudyandrest,whichannoysthemalot.Inaddition,therulethatlightsshouldbeoffontimelimitstheirownworktime.Meanwhile,theirparentsholdapointthattheirchildrencanbeprovideaplacewithabetteratmospheretostudyat.What’smore,itisreallyconvenientforparentstotakecareoftheirchildren’safter-schoollives.Inmyopinion,sincetheyareSeniorThreestudents,it’sofgreatsignificanceforthemtobeofferedaquietandfreeplacewheretheycanstudyandprepareforthecollegeentranceexamination.Moststudentsthinkthatstayingatdormsmaynothavepositiveeffectontheirstudyandrest,forthedormsmightbetoonoisytolivein.Meanwhile,theblackoutruleindormslimitsstudents’studyhours.Besides,manyparentsbelievethattheirchildrencanbeprovidedabetterenvironmentto