读后续写速成:“五点爆破”法五步写作法流程示例阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._________________________________________Step1落点：浏览所给信息,确定大意主题whoJane,TomwhatJanewaslostwhereInaforestwhenOneweekendinJulywhyAquarrelwithTom,herhusband文章大意Janewaslostintheforestforthreedaysandsurvivedintheend表达主题JanelearnedhowtocontrolemotionsanddealwithconflictsStep2重点：梳理已知段落,确定主要情节主要情节beginning…startedtoquarrel…waslostdevelopment…keptmoving…hadtostopforthenight…Roseatthebreakofday…Begantowalkalongthestreamandhope…climax(高潮）heardahelicopterending待定step3突破点：借助段落开头,确定续写内容研读续写段落的开头语Para.1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(切入点）Jane是如何熬过这个夜晚的？HowdidJanefeelthen?HowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?Didshefallasleepandwhatdidshethinkof?Para.2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup?(切入点）昨晚Jane没有被救，今天会发生什么？WasJanerescuedandwhorescuedJane?Howwassherescuedandhowdidshefeelthen?续写内容Para.1Jane是如何熬过那一夜晚的Para.2Jane是如何获救的Step4亮点：刻画细节冲突,优美连表达刻画细节冲突添加细节Jane在当晚和次日的动作，语言，心理描写以及对周围环境的描写。营造冲突扩大Jane在夜晚内