如何拓展主题句？如何拓展读写任务要点？以今年广州一模读写任务为例，要求以约120个词用英语给你妈妈回信，内容包括：（1）你读信后的感受；（2）你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；（3）你对妈妈的承诺。试看一个考生的第一个要点是怎样写的：再看另一位考生的表达：为使读写任务第二部分能取得高分,现就如何拓展主题句,组织写作思路,令到自己有话说，并且是说的有条理来进行一些探讨:如（1）：谈论个人对网上购物的看法。Ononehand,onlineshoppinghasitsadvantages.Firstly,itismuchcheaper.AsfarasI’mconcerned,onlinestoresofferlowerpricestothecustomersandsomedon’tchargedeliveryfeeifwebuymorethanone.Secondly,itismoreconvenientascustomersneedn’twalkstoreafterstoreforwhattheylike.Andit’seasierforthemtocompareproductsonline.Ontheotherhand…如（2）谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响”(主题句）TheInternetplaysavitalroleinourdailylife.（拓展句）Itnotonlyprovidespeoplewithamountsoflatestinformation,butalsochangesthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother.Besides,theInternetenablespeopletogoshoppingathomeeasilyandconveniently.2.说明原因或结果如：（1）11年广州一模要求就“诚信的重要性”的主题发表看法，要点（1）你读后的感受；（主题句-感受）Afterreadingthestory,Ifeelitisimportanttobehonest.(拓展句)It’sobviousthatanhonestpersonwilldefinitelywintherespectfromothers,whichisofgreatimportanceinourstudyanddailylife,letitaloneinthebusinessworld.However,adishonestpersonwilllosehisfameandtrustfromotherssoonerorlater.Nomatterhowintelligentheis,dishonestywillruinhisfuture.如（2）勇于认错和道歉的重要性。（主题句——重述要点）Sincenobodyisperfectandeverybodymaymakemistakes,itisofgreatimportanceforustodealwithmistakesproperlywheneverwearemistaken.(拓展句）(反面）Astheysay,denyingafaultdoublesit.Ifwerefusetoadmitourmistakeswhenwearewrong,wewillnotbeacceptedandforgivenbyothers.（正面）如(1)：就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故Whatcanwedotoavoidtrafficaccidents?①Astodrivers:a)keeptheiremotionsundercontrol;b)respectothers②Astowalkers/pedestriansandcyclists:a)strictlyobeythetrafficrules;b)valuetheirownlives如（2）你对考试作弊的看法。（主题-明示观点）Inmyopinion,thisphenomenonwillhaveaverybadeffectonmiddleschoolstudents’studyhabit.（拓展句）（细化）Thosewhousuallycheatinexamswillnevertreatstudyseriouslyagainbecausetheybelievetheywillalwaysgetgoodmarkswithoutworkinghard.考题中，我们经常遇到举事例的要点，虽然同学们都能将思路展开，把故事的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性，因此，同学们可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度表达，不