金太阳新课标资源网HYPERLINK"http://www.jtyjy.com"wx.jtyjy.com第页共NUMPAGES7页金太阳新课标资源网HYPERLINK"http://www.jtyjy.com"wx.jtyjy.comD单元短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。（一）[2012·锦州模拟]Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddle­agewomanquietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother'sshoulder.Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.However,Ialwayscan'thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother'sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.[解析]Timeandtidewaiteq\o(∧,\s\do4(for))noman.Mymotherisbecominga__middle­ageeq\o(,\s\do4(middle­aged))womanquietly.Shehaeq\o(d,\s\do4(has))beenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Bueq\o(t,\s\do4(So))theheavyburdenfallsonmymother'sshouldeeq\o(r,\s\do4(shoulders)).Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome，Ihavetogotoschoolbythe\trainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereq\o(e,\s\do4(which/that))isclosetothewindow，soIcanseeher.However，Ialwayscan'thelprueq\o(n,\s\do4(running))tearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.Iwavegentleq\o(e,\s\do4(gently))tomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow，evenifheq\o(e,\s\do4(she))isbusy，shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother'sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.（二）[2012·银川实验中学月考]Lastyear,Iwasaddictedwithplayingcomputergames.Ifoundithardtobreakingawayfromthebadhabit.Myteachertalkedtomyparentsaboutthis,andtheymademetopromisenottoplaythosegamesagain.Itriedhard,butIfoundituselessly.Themomentmyfinger