云舟学校三一口语金牌导师点评4级优秀自选话题作文云舟学校咨询电话51287249云舟网址www.yunzhou.net三一口语4级自选话题稿——宠物蓝蓝MyPet"blueblue"云舟学员：孙思桐报考级别:三一四级云舟指导老师：王桦云舟王老师点评：小作者非常喜欢小兔子，所以就以mypet为标题来叙述她和她的宠物小白兔蓝蓝的有趣故事。因为小作者对蓝蓝非常喜爱，所以在完成自选话题作业时也非常的认真，话题的准备的也非常的积极。所以帮助孩子们准备自选话题的时候,一定要选择孩子感兴趣的内容,不然就会变成了简单机械的背诵和填鸭式的教学.1.HowdidIgetmylittlerabbit?Iwantedtohaveapet,sinceIwasveryyoung.Onedaymymother,myfatherandIwentshoppingonmybirthday.Wewenttoamarketsellingplantsandanimals,becausetheyhadpromisedmetobuyalittlepetasmybirthdaypresent.Whenwearrivedthere,Isawalotofboxesandintheboxestherewerealotofcutepetsinside.Isuddenlystopped,whenIsawaboxwithsomelittlerabbits.Therewereblackrabbitsandwhiterabbits.theyweresolovely.AndIwassoexcited.BecauseIlikelittlerabbitssomuch,andIlikewhiterabbitsbest.SoItoldmymotherthatIwantedalittlerabbitasmypet.ThenIchoseasmallerrabbitandmymotherboughtalittleboxasitshome.Thenwewenthomewithmylittlelovelypresent.IthoughtitwasmybestpresentthatIhadgot.Teacherwhichonedoyoulike,blackorwhite?云舟王老师点评：首段叙述了小作者是怎样得到小白兔的，主要运用了四级的语法点-过去式。2.What'sthemostinterestingthingbetweenmeandmylittlerabbit?Themostinterestingthingbetweenuswasthatonetimemymotherletmeputmyrabbitinitsbox,becauseitwaslatenight.Afterputtingitinitsbox,Iwenttosleep,too.ButwhenIgotupnextmorning,Ifoundmylittlerabbitwasnotinitsbox.ThenIlookedforiteverywhere,butIstillcouldn'tfindit.Iwasveryworriedaboutmylittlerabbit.SuddenlyIheardsomenoise.Iturnedround,andfounditeatingmyfather'sshoes.Becauseitwassohungry.Luckily,myfather'sshoeswereOK.Myfatherwasn'tangrywithit,either.Becausemyfatheralsothoughtitwasveryfunny.Mylittlerabbitissonaughtyandcute.Ireallylovemylittle,naughty"blue,blue".云舟王老师点评：此段主要写了小作者和小白兔，蓝蓝的有趣故事，在此段中主要运用的语法点是动词过去式和形容词的比较级，最高级。3.WhatamIgoingtohaveanotherpetinthefuture?Iamgoingtobuyablackrabbit,because“blueblue”doesn’thavefriendtoplay.BecauseIhavetogotoschoolandafterschoolIhavealotofhomeworktodo.AndatweekendIalwayshavemanyextra-classes.Somylittle"blueblue"alwaysstaysaloneathome.Ithinkitsometimesfeelslonely.Iamgoingtocalltheblackrabb